It's that time of the year. Everyone is scrambling to get their applications done and submitted before the deadline. And, of course, since the part of the application students struggle with the most is the personal statement, they've left it to the very end. Now is when I start getting stressed-out phone calls and emails: What should I write about? Does the statement really matter if I have great numbers? How long does the statement have to be?
Although it's impossible for me to cover everything that I think a personal statement should do and convey in a single short blog post (in fact, those who know me know that I could probably write page after page after page on personal statement topic selection alone),I can give some pointers on the basics of what to do--and what not to do.
So. Why is the law school application personal statement so important? And how do you not mess it up from the get-go?
Schools place a premium on the personal statement because it’s the one thing on your application that deals with the essence of the law profession: writing. Law school admissions committees want the opportunity to examine your writing and determine the degree of efficacy with which you can create and develop logical ideas while also reaching out and connecting with an audience.
In addition, law schools are interested in knowing what you value personally, professionally, morally, and intellectually, and the personal statement is the place to see that. It presents a “human” aspect to your law school application that can be found nowhere else and, in certain situations, can be the deciding factor between a denial or waitlist, or a waitlist and an acceptance.
I wish I could tell you how to write the perfect personal statement. Unfortunately, because the best personal statements are, well, personal, the choice of topic and how you'll write it is all up to you. There is no one way to tell someone how to write a great personal statement, since everyone has a different writing style and story to tell.
However, there are a few rules you can follow that will ensure that you are at least keeping within what will make admissions officers happy:
Steer clear of gimmicky essays. Things like colored or patterned paper, computer graphics, attached photos of you as a toddler, video or DVD essays, or statements written in the form of an LSAT logical reasoning question do nothing but attract attention--the wrong kind of attention. The admissions committee wants to read a clear, well-written, well-though-out statement that demonstrates you are a serious candidate for a JD from their school; they don't want to have to squint at odd graphics, wonder why you had that haircut when you were two years old, or attempt to understand faux-LSAT gibberish. In other words: Just because Elle Woods submitted a video essay in Legally Blonde and got into Harvard Law, that doesn’t mean it’ll work for you.
Don't write a two-paragraph, one-page, double-spaced essay. That's less copy than most 30-second TV ads have, and how much do you really know about the product once they're over? Instead, give the Admissions Committee something substantial to read and get to know you with. You can’t really get to know someone in 250 words or less. On the other hand, do not ramble on for 10 single-spaced, 8pt font pages. Respect your audience, and show them that you understand how important their time is by writing a 2-3 page personal statement with default margins in 12pt font that can be read cohesively in a minimal amount of time.
Avoid thesaurus-speak. If you don’t know how to use a “big” or “fancy” word, or the way you have it in your essay sounds strange, take it out. A big vocabulary is only impressive when it is used correctly (and the indiscriminate use of a thesaurus can end in law school application comedic disaster).
Grammar. Spelling. Punctuation. These are a few of Admissions Committees’ favorite things.
Present your best side. Don’t use the personal statement to gripe about something that you thought was bad or unfair; if you must, then also take the time to talk about how that negative experience allowed you to grow as a person and allowed you to see things in a different perspective.
Don’t let your personal statement be a regurgitation of your résumé. The Admissions Committee has your résumé in front of them; they don’t need to see it again in a longer format. Use the personal statement to anecdotally show them who the person who did all those things and had all those accomplishments is.
Most importantly, don’t play it safe. Write about something that touched you, something you can be passionate about, something that you know embodies you and what you believe in, even if it seems a little unorthodox. Don’t let a fear of being a little too “out there” keep you from wowing the Admissions Committee or leaving an indelible mark in their minds. After all, it’s better to be “that guy who juggles fire” or “that girl with the 3 show dogs” than “that kid that wrote the essay about their European backpacking trip…no, not that one…or that one…not that one, either…”.
Of course, there are many more pointers I could give, but these are, in my mind, the most basic and important. Above all else, make sure you have someone else read and comment on your essay before you submit it, and take their feedback seriously. If they don't "get" the essay, they think it's dry or boring, or they raise their eyebrows and ask you if you're serious, go back to the drawing board. It may take a few tries before you get a good essay but, believe me, after your LSAT and GPA, it's the most important part of your application. Take your time and do it right.
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How do I write a great law school personal statement?
You really want advice on your law school personal statement?
Great. Let's take a step back.
Before we discuss your law school essay, let me ask you this: Have you done all that you can to get a good LSAT score (our even retaken it if you think you can do better)? If you are still in college, are you working hard at improving your GPA?
No? Then go do those things first. That is a much better use of your time to get into a better law school than you get get into right now.
If you've done all you can with your GPA and LSAT, then come back and read this.
Here's the good news. It doesn't matter much. Those two things--your LSAT and GPA- will matter much much more than writing the world's best essay.
As I mentioned before, your law school essay is worth very little in the grander scheme of your application. It is not like your college application, where at the most elite schools, an excellent personal statement is extremely important.
But for a law school application, for the most part, your statement can only hurt you, not help you.
That is, a perfect, beautiful moving, law school personal statement will not get you into a school if you are not at least within a couple points of the median LSAT and GPA.
On the other hand, a terribly written law school essay can hurt your application even if your LSAT and GPA are excellent.
So let's put this all in perspective: your personal statement needs to be good enough, and no more than that. It isn't worth obsessing over (unless you are applying for merit scholarships, in which case you do want them to sing).
So here are a couple of guidelines on what it takes for your law school personal statement to be good enough:
- Make sure that your law school personal statement is primarily about the law, your interest in it, and why you want to be a lawyer. You are, after all, applying to law school.
- I've read essays for clients and friends that had nothing to do with the law. One I read was entirely about the challenges of rock-climbing and . . . mumbled something at the end about wanting to be a lawyer. Not convincing. You don't have to have your life planned out completely, but you need to be able to say something about why you want to be a lawyer.
- On the other hand, don't say that you wanted to be a lawyer ever since you were a child. Unless it is true. Actually, even if it is true, you might not want to say that. Surprisingly, the people in admissions offices are rarely hard-core attorneys. Sometimes they are people who went to law school, became lawyers for a while, didn't like it, and went into admissions. Sometimes, they are people who were never lawyers at all. The point is, they may not relate to if you say "I wanted to be a lawyer ever since I was 4 years old," and if your application is right on the borderline (which is the only time it will matter), maybe you won't get it. But maybe it won't matter in the end.
- Make your personal statement interesting and entertaining--make your personality come through. That doesn't mean anything specific, but make your personality come through. Have any doubts? Ask at least two friends who will be brutally honest with you to read it.
- Make sure that you've proofread it. For the love of God, it's just a two-page statement.
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